Minggu, 29 Maret 2015

REPHRASING SOFT NEWS

IS TAYLOR SWIFT DATING WITH ‘PLAYER’ CALVIN HARRIS?


Source : nydailytimes.com/entertainment
Rephrased by SLAMET PRASOJO/2211412048


Some pictures explained that a rumours about possible romance between Taylor Swift and Calvin Harris coming true. Twosome were spotted hanging out in Whole Foods in Nashville, Tennese earlier this week. Surprisingly, it was not the first time they were cached in the same occasion. If the picture tells the truth, a month of rumours just possible happen.

If recent pictures are anything to go by, Taylor Swift and Calvin Harris are set to become pop's biggest power couple since both of them are influential pop’s singer. But if 31-year-old DJ Calvin is to become the new Mr Taylor Swift then he should aware that he might end up becoming the subject of one of her songs like swift’s other formers.

Taylor is well known for writing about her love life, with her former boyfriends John Mayer, Harry Styles and Joe Jonas all having inspired tracks on her various albums. Taylor herself even admits that her relationships do inspire her music even she's always careful not to go into specifics.

Taylor’s phenomenal songs such as Back to December was dedicated for her former Harry Styles in that time. Calvin’s fans agree because Taylor is exactly what Calvin needs in a girlfriend. She is wholesome, big-hearted southern belle who will do anything for her man, and that Calvinlikes in a woman. However if rumour dating with Dj Calvin comes true, Dj Calvin will be the next her inspired song. Will he?



Rabu, 25 Maret 2015

MAKING NEWS

Hashtag #SaveTBRS has no effect.
















Hashtag #SaveTBRS on Twitter massively makes the hastag became first trending topic on Semarang area responding on the planning of Transcorp to build Third Trans Studio in Semarang.  Semarang people opinion to reject on the planning since it will destruct the existence of Taman Budaya Raden Saleh as a cultural spot in Semarang masively tweeted through the hashtag.

 An art college Student, Hendra said “The planning to build Trans Studio in TBRS area will harm the existence of local artists since it eliminates the place where artists usually be in”

“On the other side, the establishment of Trans Studio hopefully gives better entertainment place in Semarang since Semarang lack of big theme park as big as Trans Studio”. Hendra added.

The establishment of Trans Studio is planned to build in the end of year but seeing the respond of Semarang people, the developer faces serious problem. People afraid of the damage goes to public places which lead to the privatisation since the open public space in Semarang is very limited.

Tommy, an English Student expects that the establishment of Trans Studio Bandung must go on, because in Central Java lack of entertainment places compared to Bandung, Jakarta even Surabaya. “Government must concern on the development of the entertainment while government also has to find new place for TBRS when the execution begun” He said.

Furthermore, A Student of Regional and Urban Engineering, Ahmad said “ He totally disagree of establishment Trans Studio because the ticket entrance is expensive enough”

”It can be enjoyed for rich people only. Poor people will be more ignored to enjoy the entertainment’’ He added.

“The raise of entertainment’s need leads Trans Studio builds its own third place in Semarang since Semarang as capital of Central Java left behind when compared to other in Java Island” Laksmi, An English Literature Student said.
”Semarang has to equalize its own position, Central Java needs big entertainment venue” Hardian, friend of Laksmi added.

Hashtag #SaveTBRS occurs just because the high responses of people to be more cultural understanding about the existence of TBRS” Jenny said.

In one particular line, five other people have some in expressing their idea that he controversy of establishment Trans Studio in Semarang through hastag #SaveTBRS only a case of responses between modernity and saving the cultures. 

Minggu, 22 Maret 2015

RE-VERSED HARD NEWS (WEB JOURNALISM)

Protecting the Sovereignty on RI-Malaysia border.

Reversed by Slamet Prasojo

N. Adri, The Jakarta Post, Balikpapan | March 20 2015| 5:57 AM

The Indonesian Military (TNI) is having planning to set up more security posts along the North Kalimantan and East Kalimantan borders with Malaysia, which are more than 1,000 kilometers long and adding another 17 posts to make a total of 50 posts along the border area. The project would be applied to the 2015 state budget, but said the amount had yet to be fully calculated.


The new border checkpoints were becoming more crucial because of an increase in the number of trespassers from both countries, which consequently raised the security threat. Purwito stated. The main duty of border soldiers is to protect the border by preventing the state boundaries from being shifted. In the past, the border markers were shifted by illegal loggers from Malaysia in order to take timber from
Indonesia’s forested areas. Oil palm plantations also did the same thing not too long ago. “Now, the border markers are seldom shifted, thanks to our intensive patrols,” added Purwito.

Border security troops are placed under the command of the task force. The TNI has deployed two battalions to watch over the West Kalimantan-Sarawak border and the East Kalimantan and North Kalimantan-Sarawak and Sabah borders. The troops are stationed at the border posts, which serve as patrol bases as well as providing a sense of security for nearby communities. This stretch of the border passes through areas like Long Pahangai in Mahakam Ulu regency (southwest of East Kalimantan), going northward to the Sungai Boh in Malinau regency and Long Bawan in Nunukan regency, North Kalimantan, and then extending from west to east through Lumbis, Tatagas, Simantobol and Sebuku.

The border security posts are generally located on mountain ridges, such as in the Schwaner mountainous region, which acts as a natural border between Indonesia and Malaysia. However, they are also located at various other locales, such as the Simantobol and Simantopol posts, which are located in the middle of the jungle and far from human settlements, while the post in Long Bawan is located in the densely populated Long Bawan district. Most of them are modestly built of timber.

The posts are usually modified by soldiers stationed in them in such ways that make them more functional and habitable. A number of disputes in the border areas keep occurring. A recent one took place in November 2014, when the government said that three out of 10 villages in the Lumbis Ongon subdistrict, Nunukan, North

Kalimantan, were declared to be part of Malaysia’s territory. The village areas were poor and had no access to the Indonesian government’s development projects, so the government concluded that prolifirate development could reduce poverty as well as protect the territory.

Rabu, 18 Maret 2015

TAKING THE SURROUNDING PICTURE


Colo, Muria Kudus Central Java.
A Seller in foods-tall of Colo Tourism Village who selling some of specific foods of Muria mountain was busy on arranging her stuff in quiet situation of tourism activities. There was no specific business activities since this season is categorized into low season visit. 

Jumat, 13 Maret 2015

A RE-VERSED NEWS

Hunger attacking Tribal Children which leading to the illness.
A Re-Versed News by Slamet Prasojo
Jon Afrizal, The Jakarta Post, Jambi | Headlines | Mon, March 09 2015, 6:03 AM
Headlines News

A nomadic group known as the Orang Rimba who stated in Batanghari regency Jambi suffer from hunger. Illness and hunger attack four children from the Orang Rimba nomadic group.
One-year-old Cipak and 12-year-old Merute were reported being isolated in the state-owned hospital in Muarabulian city, Batanghari by the pediatric ward’s isolation. The children were suspected having hunger live in a tribal group who live in Bukit Dua Belas National Park (TNBD)
Mangku Terap as the tribe’s chief said that The children have been treated since Saturday, followed by two other children. They are Besikap, 4, and Sebilau, 3 have been treated as outpatients.

He added that before being admitted to the hospital, the children had been suffering from a high fever in seven days not to mention the group had conducted a traditional herbs in first treatment to no avail.
Mangku continued his explanation that finally the group decided to bring them to the hospital.
“Seven more children in the forest where they lived had also been suffering from the same disease but they were yet to able to take them to the hospital” He extended.

Beby Andihara, one of the doctors at the hospital said the patients were suffering form fever, cough, and acute respiratory infection. He added “ Apparently, these were caused by malnutrition and bad sanitation.
He explained, being nomadic and malnourished weakened their bodies such that they were vulnerable to diseases.

“The patients would be referred to a hospital in Jambi city, the provincial capital if the patient did not improve in the next few days”. Said the doctor
The patients shoud not be afraid of medical expenses because as the Batanghari regency administration would cover it.


The unit coordinator of The Warsi Indonesian Conservation Community (KKI Warsi), Kristiawan said the patients belonged to the Temenggung Marituha tribal group. Eleven Orang Rimba in TNBD had died over the past two months.He added Most were members of the Temenggung Marituha group.

Kristiawan highly expected  that the government would proactively provide health and food aid, and, most importantly, medical treatments to the ill children.

Moreover, the Jambi provincial Social Manpower and Transmigration Agency’s Suku Anak Dalam section head Usup said his office had started investigating the deaths of the Orang Rimba caused by starvation to get further details of the cases.
The case was being serious problem because the tribe’s nomadic life difficult to track them down which inline with the difficulty of accessing the areas, he explained.
He added,  the government was committed to putting an end to the misery and curing all the sick people in the tribe. “That way no more people will die because of famine,” he said,
KKI Warsi reported detailly that the cases harmed the victims since they were difficult in finding their food because the forest was damaged by unresponsible parties.
Yomi added that tribe people have strong tradition in which they are not allowed to eat their own hunted meat. The condition was being worse since the areas are lack of clean water and had been polluted by industrial waste.
Statistic of KKI Warsi shows that around 3,850 Orang Rimba were forced to travel long distances without being able to feed themselves properly in which leading them to be attrackted by mulnutrition and suffer of hunger.
Temenggung Nyenyong as the leader of 35 families of Orang Rimba expects to really care toward the national park for clean water. He also hope that government must take much attention to the forest destruction that leading to the unsafety home for the Orang Rimba.



Minggu, 08 Maret 2015

#KoinUntukAustralia to be handed to Oz embassy Monday

The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | March 08 2015 | 3:29 PM

Four million rupiah (US$ 308) worth of coins collected during the satirical #KoinUntukAustralia (Coins for Australia) donation campaign will be delivered to the Australian Embassy in Jakarta on Monday.
Prime Minister Tony Abott, the primary target of this campaign, drew the ire of the Indonesian public after he made remarks suggesting that Indonesia was showing a degree of ungratefulness by not pardoning two Australian nationals currently awaiting execution for drug charges even though the Australian government donated a great deal of money following the 2004 Indian Ocean Tsunami.

Abbot's remarks sparked a campaign, hashtagged on twitter as #koinuntukaustralia, #koinuntukabbott and #coinsforaustralia, through which Indonesians gave back the aid money that they received from Australia in the form of coins, perhaps a critique on Abbot's stingy and petty remarks. The campaign spread all the way to Aceh, where the 2004 tsunami hit the hardest.

“Monday at 9 a.m., we will hand in all the coins collected from this campaign to the Australian Embassy. Sunday will be the final day for people to donate their coins,” Pro Indonesia Coalition (KPI)'s action coordinator Rahmat Himran said on Sunday as quoted by kompas.com.

There are reportedly three bags full of coins, some of which came from Aceh. Rahmat added that they are still awaiting on coins delivered from other regions.

The two Australian nationals, Andrew Chan and Myuran Sukumaran, are currently at Nusakambangan prison island in Central Java awaiting execution after losing their clemency bid. (dyl)
A Review to Jakarta Post.
#KoinUntukAustralia to be handed to Oz embassy Monday
The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | March 08 2015 | 3:29 PM


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