The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | March 08 2015 | 3:29 PM
Four million rupiah (US$ 308) worth of coins collected
during the satirical #KoinUntukAustralia (Coins for Australia) donation
campaign will be delivered to the Australian Embassy in Jakarta on Monday.
Prime Minister Tony Abott, the primary target of this
campaign, drew the ire of the Indonesian public after he made remarks
suggesting that Indonesia was showing a degree of ungratefulness by not pardoning
two Australian nationals currently awaiting execution for drug charges even
though the Australian government donated a great deal of money following the
2004 Indian Ocean Tsunami.
Abbot's remarks sparked a campaign, hashtagged on
twitter as #koinuntukaustralia, #koinuntukabbott and #coinsforaustralia,
through which Indonesians gave back the aid money that they received from
Australia in the form of coins, perhaps a critique on Abbot's stingy and petty
remarks. The campaign spread all the way to Aceh, where the 2004 tsunami hit
the hardest.
“Monday at 9 a.m., we will hand in all the coins
collected from this campaign to the Australian Embassy. Sunday will
be the final day for people to donate their coins,” Pro Indonesia Coalition
(KPI)'s action coordinator Rahmat Himran said on Sunday as quoted
by kompas.com.
There are reportedly three bags full of coins, some of
which came from Aceh. Rahmat added that they are still awaiting on coins
delivered from other regions.
The two Australian nationals, Andrew Chan and Myuran
Sukumaran, are currently at Nusakambangan prison island in Central Java
awaiting execution after losing their clemency bid. (dyl)
A Review to Jakarta Post.
#KoinUntukAustralia to be handed to Oz embassy Monday
The Jakarta Post, Jakarta | March 08 2015 | 3:29 PM
A review on news above can
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and ideal when fulfill the criteria such as accurate, balanced, fair, objective,
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news. Starting from the first point, accurate. The news entitled
#KoinUntukAustralia to be handed to Oz embassy Monday can be judged as accurate
since it gives statistic and data which show the accuracy of the news. The statistic
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date, amount of something counted. The proofs are Four million rupiah (US$ 308) worth of coins collected during the
satirical #KoinUntukAustralia (Coins for Australia) and “Monday at 9 a.m., we will hand in all the
coins collected from this campaign to the Australian Embassy. Furthermore,
the accuracy can also be seen since the writer mentions the stakeholders
related to the news. Continuing in the second criteria, the news must be
balanced. The reviewer believes that the news cannot be categorized as balance
since the writer wrote unbalancedly to the one of specific stakeholders. The writer mostly
writes on the side of Indonesian while ignoring the existence of Australian.
Not to mention the portion on the news mostly written in the perspective of
Indonesian. The third criterion is fair. A fair news can be examined by looking
at the portion on the news. The reviewer claims that the news is unfair. The
writer only sees and clarify on the side of Indonesian while lack of
explanation from Australian or Prime Minister of Australia. Nevertheless the
reason why Australian does so must be clearly explained as well as Indonesian
does. Same as the reason explained above, the fourth criteria objective can be
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directly to the main topic without many remarks on the first lines. This clarity
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since the news is written from the main point to the minor point in the end
without eliminating the conclusion. The last criterion is current. The news is
exactly update to the recent issues on the conflict between Indonesia and
Australia. It gives updated news from the issues and additional news that must
be known by the readers. In short, the news only fulfills three of seven
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that basically the news must be fulfill the criteria in order to produce the
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